[PRIMARY RESEARCH] CRITTING WITH PEERS

I decided to ask my psychology and translation friends for advice regarding the content and the game rules. They helped a lot and the friend who is studying psychology definitely gave useful comments in designing the questions as she know how to put herself into the shoes of audience well. My translation friends helped to make each and every wording. accurate and precise, without adding in any personal preference in them. They helped me a lot and we talked about the phrasings of the questions, the game instructions and the striking sentence which would be placed on the back cover of the packaging. This is probably the most useful discussion I have had throughout the project and I have learnt a lot from it.