Today, we had a quick crit with Pat and the group. As there were 2 final designs that I have no idea which one to choose from, I showed them in the crit and asked people for advice on which one to choose from and what could be refined in terms of the layout.
final design1
final design2
SUGGESTIONS AND ADVICE
1. Having the space spared out for the Os narrower.
2. The Os on the back cover wasn't really legible. Could be in dark blue like the other letters.
3. "MY NAME IS AUGUST" was repeated. The quote under the eye could arc like the text on top. So that the text would be like wrapping around the eye to make the layout less cliche.
4. The Os on the front cover could be turning into more like a cloud each time when repeated.
This was the final outcome after all the refinements.
The final outcome was finally done today and I will proceed to the design boards. I have been working on the design boards lately and was waiting for the final outcome to be completed to finish my design development page and final outcome page. I will finish my design board today and tomorrow so that I will be able to get prepared for printing on Monday morning before the final crit.
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